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Red roses spring from red blood shed
And family learns to weep
Pitter patter goes the tear drop rain
At least now, their loved ones sleep

Tortured dreams of twisted faces
Of friends in far too deep
Pitter patter goes the bullet rain
Cut down, the cherished sleep

War is waged, but seldom won
Armies don't play for keeps
Pitter patter goes the shrapnel rain
For now, the gun-dragon sleeps

Brave young noble joins the fray
To make that giant leap
Pitter patter goes the pen-ink rain
Tonight, a Soldier sleeps
©2007-2009 ~Black-Roses-Fall
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War in reverse. From grief to death to war to signing up.

All in the thick of things.

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:iconzeaphyra:
owwwww :'( so beautiful .... and sad.
Very well spoken. I like the pitter patter thing as if in a child's play refrain ... As if all was due to come, fatally, from the beginning to the end. Or from the end of the beginning.
As if everything, as tough as it is, made sense.
That's how I feel it anyway ^^;

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"The point of power is always in the present moment" (Louise L. Hay)

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:iconn-g-e:
Interesting approach. Good execution too. Well done :)
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Mmm. Exactly my dear. I detest war. It is just biggost egotistical leaders sacrificing their pawns, whilst they merely gain more riches.

I'm glad you saw some beauty in it though :)

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Thanks man.

This was supposed to be an almost angry poem.. but eh, sad works too :nod:

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We are all one-winged angels. We cannot fly unless we embrace another.

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:iconzeaphyra:
I hate violence, thus war. :D And I can't help but feel something in every art you make. You really are gifted, I hope you're conscious about that. :)

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"The point of power is always in the present moment" (Louise L. Hay)

My litterature, my drawings, my world ...
:heart:
Photos by my beloved! ...
:iconblack-roses-fall:
Well, so many gorgeous souls have told me so, so it must be true. :nod:

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We are all one-winged angels. We cannot fly unless we embrace another.

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O Danny Bhoy the pipes, the pipes are calling...
Very nice, I escpecially like ther "pitter-patter" thing.
Great job. :D

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You're a Danny :p

Thanks bud :)

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We are all one-winged angels. We cannot fly unless we embrace another.

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:iconzeaphyra:
So i'm not the only one gorgeous soul ... :'(

P.S. : just kidding, eh ;)

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"The point of power is always in the present moment" (Louise L. Hay)

My litterature, my drawings, my world ...
:heart:
Photos by my beloved! ...

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