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I'm sorry we couldn't click my dear
I'm anguished we couldn't meet
But please don't be upset tonight
Just stand tall on two feet

Before you nod on off tonight
And drift away to sleep
Stop and take five deep breaths
We'll meet together in a dream

We'll come together some other time
And laugh and paint and play
And you'll tell me all you used to know
And all you wanted to say

Before you nod on off tonight
And drift away to sleep
Stop and take five deep breaths
We'll meet together in a dream

I'd tell you my dark secret
Of how I loved you dear
Of how you make me glow with life
Of how I crave you near

Before you nod on off tonight
And drift away to sleep
Stop and take five deep breaths
We'll meet together in a dream
©2007-2009 ~Black-Roses-Fall
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Speaks for itself..

"It takes 22 steps.."

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:iconjadexgirl:
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I think this poem belongs in two places.
My favourites section and my left thigh. :)

I love it.

--
'what we have here is a dreamer.
someone completely out of touch with reality.
when she jumped, she probably thought she could fly.'
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:hug:

I'm glad to hear it dear one,
take from it what you will..
it's yours to feast upon :)

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We are all one-winged angels. We cannot fly unless we embrace another.

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:iconfucktuesdays:
I like the rhyme scheme here, something we don't see a lot. (Although sleep and dream are a bit of a stretch :D).

How I crave you [to be?] near

Not sure what that means, but okay. :P

I tend to over analyze xD
:iconn-g-e:
Aww...that is sweet, I like it :) The meeting in the dream kind of reminds me of my "Dreams" :)
:iconblack-roses-fall:
Yeah, it's meant to mean "I crave you near me"

--
We are all one-winged angels. We cannot fly unless we embrace another.

Join the Revolution - [link]
:iconblack-roses-fall:
Thank you very much :)

--
We are all one-winged angels. We cannot fly unless we embrace another.

Join the Revolution - [link]
:iconseeminglymeaningless:
hahahhaa - sounds......... nevermind

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What's yours until it's mine - and mine until you know? Well - that's a secret now, isn't it?

:mib: :mib:
:iconblack-roses-fall:
No comment huh? :p

--
We are all one-winged angels. We cannot fly unless we embrace another.

Join the Revolution - [link]
:iconseeminglymeaningless:
weeeeeeeeeeeel - sounds kinda like......... i dunno

--
What's yours until it's mine - and mine until you know? Well - that's a secret now, isn't it?

:mib: :mib:

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