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Feel by ~Black-Roses-Fall:iconBlack-Roses-Fall:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Fixed


And now,
You realise that every once
From the get go
It's okay just to let go
And tell them all to see how it feels

Because now,
You want to tell her
Baby, I'm sorry
It seems it's time for you to feel sorry
For the times you didn't know how to feel

And when you're gone away again
I'll learn to pray and stray
And be stronger,
And stay a little bit longer
If only just to see how it feels

But tell me how,
You block me out and wrap me up
Without my own halo
You got your own shiny halo
I wish I knew the way that it feels

So baby now,
I'm rigging up, I'm shipping out
I'm gonna go sailing
No you can't catch me sailing
Until I learn to fix how I feel.
©2009 ~Black-Roses-Fall
:iconblack-roses-fall:

Author's Comments

Yeah, random tune in my head.

Watching lots of Scrubs whilst single + eating ice cream and condensed milk at the same time. :)

Life's okay.

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*liluthofthevalley Jun 6, 2009, 8:39:26 AM
I like this one. Haven't seen a lot of poetry from you lately. Glad that things are going good, or at least okay.

--
Down in the belly of the beast I lie.
All I save is my
PAIN.


Belly of the Beast (Danzig)
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~Black-Roses-Fall Jun 6, 2009, 2:13:48 PM
Yeah, things are looking up at the moment. :)

Nice to see you too Liluth.

--
We are all one-winged angels. We cannot fly unless we embrace another.

Join the Revolution - [link]
:iconliluthofthevalley:
*liluthofthevalley Jun 6, 2009, 4:30:39 PM
Don't be a stranger, you're my oldest friend on here, so to speak.

--
Down in the belly of the beast I lie.
All I save is my
PAIN.


Belly of the Beast (Danzig)
:iconlonecannan:
~LoneCannan Jun 6, 2009, 5:09:47 PM
i may not have been on here for very long but i do feel as if i've know you for a really long time
*liluthofthevalley is right don't be a stranger
it's always a good thing when life is looking up
as dory from finding nemo would say
just keep swimmin'
lol
please check out my new deviant(hands clapsed)
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~Black-Roses-Fall Jun 6, 2009, 10:17:59 PM
Ah, I'm always lurking somewhere. :p

--
We are all one-winged angels. We cannot fly unless we embrace another.

Join the Revolution - [link]
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~BlackEnvy Jun 6, 2009, 11:44:54 PM
I like this theme of fixing yourself - something I've been working on lately & perhaps some poetry to match soon.

--
A heart at the end of its' tether
Swiftly descending into blame,
Pain lasts only a minute,
Resounds through generations forever;
The aftermath, it spells my name.
:iconliluthofthevalley:
*liluthofthevalley Jun 7, 2009, 1:03:06 PM
Good to know. Me too.

--
Just one kiss from my lips
Will rake your soul over burning coals.


Killer Wolf (Danzig)
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~Black-Roses-Fall Jun 7, 2009, 4:42:33 PM
*nods*

It's a hard thing to do. But it's worth it. :)

--
We are all one-winged angels. We cannot fly unless we embrace another.

Join the Revolution - [link]
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~Intrinsica Oct 1, 2009, 3:47:05 PM
Looks like we both had some work to do, huh?

I hope you have "fixed" yourself, dearling.
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