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Your mother speaks of Winter
And how snow men always melt
But she never had a lover
Never knew just how it felt

Outside his window
These whistling trees
They talk to me,
Telling me he's forever,
Evergreen

Her heart song sings of Autumn
Of falling leaves and tears
Of cold and lonely nights alone
Just her, wrapped up in fear

Outside her window
These whistling trees
They talk to me,
Telling me she's forever,
Evergreen

And maybe, in the Summer
When ice lets go of heart
And sunshine fills her soul again
She'll let you try and start
©2007-2009 ~Black-Roses-Fall
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Author's Comments

This time, I'm riding home on the bus.. and the phrase:

These trees
Are Evergreen

Got stuck in my head.

Go figure.

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:iconzeaphyra:
hehe. the bus. eternal source of inspiration.
I once wrote of zelda in this bus. Well ... twas the beginning :D

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"The point of power is always in the present moment" (Louise L. Hay)

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Photos by my beloved! ...
:iconblack-roses-fall:
Eh, I daydream ALOT.

Buses are good for that :)

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:iconzeaphyra:
during classes, transport and at home.
I know what you feel. On teh plane I want to sleep, but in the bus, I just think and time goes by pretty fast in the end...

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"The point of power is always in the present moment" (Louise L. Hay)

My litterature, my drawings, my world ...
:heart:
Photos by my beloved! ...
:iconjadexgirl:
Max, this is beautiful. :)

:hug:

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'what we have here is a dreamer.
someone completely out of touch with reality.
when she jumped, she probably thought she could fly.'
:iconblack-roses-fall:
Thank you sweet girl :hug:

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We are all one-winged angels. We cannot fly unless we embrace another.

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:iconmwiings:
This is a really lovely piece and i get a "clean" impression, i dont know how to explain it, happy is to washy an emotion, its very clean, in a good way tho :D

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Bravery is merely applauded stupidity...
:iconlordazrael85:
"And maybe, in the Summer
When ice lets go of heart
And sunshine fills her soul again
She'll let you try and start"

^ That's easily my favorite stanza from anything I've seen you write thus far. Brilliantly romantic!

You always seem to be following along the same themes as I do, but you take that slightly different course that makes it your own.

Good job, once again, bro! My favorite gallery is getting full due to your poetic awesomeness. =P

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Reality is just one dream-walk away...
:iconblack-roses-fall:
Naw, am I gonna have to buy you a friendship bracelet or something :p

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:iconblack-roses-fall:
Thank you very much deary :) :hug:

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